Summary:
Alliteration: the repetition of usually initial consonant sounds in two or more neighboring words or syllables.
SUMMER SHOWER
The rain falls softly against my window pane
The rain falls softly against my window pane
tentative at first,
like a hesitant lover
not sure his presence is welcome.
Then...becoming bolder...not
wanting this moment to pass him by.
In a matter of moments,
the azure blue sky,
with a whisper of gossamer pillows
playing tag around the sun,
abruptly put an end to their frivolity.
Like a stern parent,
he summoned them together,
as in a war counsel,
to chastise them for their playfullness.
Thunder, rolls across the sky
with a might roar,
and lightning
streaks across the heavens
to add a reprimand to the proceedings!
After a few moments,
exhausted and spent,
the sky once again returns
to it's former splendor
and pays homage to the Sun.
Reaction: Well to me this is a very good, But it just does not have enough alliteration in it.
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